While the storm raged outside, the little family lived in their little world.
Granny sat contentedly in the squashy armchair, deftly crocheting brightly coloured woollen squares from remnants of wool, her gaily coloured knee rug tucked well about her.
“You alright my darling?” asked mummy touching granny’s silver curls fondly.
Granny smiled and nodded, carefully storing the caress with all the others in her heart.
Mother bent down and picked up baby who had wormed her fat, adorable way across the floor towards Granny’s wool basket.
“You hungry, lovely one?” mummy asked.
Baby’s smile transformed her into a cherub and she flung her arms about mummy’s neck.
“May we go to the seaside tomorrow?” Asked one of the twins, his face pressed to the window.
“I think it will be too wet.”
Mother for a moment thought that the raindrops running down the glass were her son’s tears, he looked so forlorn.
A door knock.
“Daddy!” cried the twins as mummy opened the door with a smile on her beautiful face.
“Telegram!”…
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Thanks to Priceless Joy for the photo prompt for this week’s Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers and day 4 of writing 101 with the photo prompt “Window”. It made me think of a little family tucked away behind a rain drenched window and this story was the result.
I love the way you set up the scene TJ, it is so vivid and clear. Also, the ending leaves our minds to imagine what comes next. Love it!! Thank you so much for participating in the Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers challenge!
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Thank you as always for inspiring us each week. 🙂
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My pleasure!
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You definitely painted a family portrait here. I like how you skillfully wove each character into the scene without it being too cluttered. Great job!
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Thanks so much! It is fun trying to generate a sense of character with so few words.
Best wishes.
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Ah what a lovely scene…I could imagine my own Grandmaman knitting and my mom there too. Not rare to see 3 and sometimes 4 generations in one household…the love and warmth is so evident in this home and you end it with a bang. Makes me think of a movie during the 2nd World War or Vietnam war. Well done!!
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Thank you very much. This was just what I was hoping readers might pick up on. I had in mind a WWII vintage piece. Hope you have a lovely day! 🙂
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I think here I could relate more to WWII as well and my grandmother and her mother getting bad news about my uncle
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It happened so tragically for so many families. At that time too people just seemed to have to accept the news without any offers of support. It is unbelievable that the world, alas, continues to be filled with conflict.
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As your blog title says, la vie est trop courte…
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Very true. 🙂
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Oh my … I hope it isn’t bad news. Telegrams always seem to have a nightmare attached to them.
Great build up and execution. The ending is perfect. I enjoyed this very much. Good take on the photo prompt.
Isadora 😎
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Thanks so much. I have always thought of telegrams as very worrying. This new generation has no idea about them at all now of course. Thanks so much for your encouragement. 🙂
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Oh, what an ending! Such a lovely and loving scene of the generations and then you hit us with that. Great writing.
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Thanks for reading. I felt bad ending it like that but it just came to me that way as I wrote.
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You handled it deftly – there’s always a grace in your writing.
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What a kind thing to say. (blushing under my beard). 🙂
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Such a lovely woven image of this family. Then I read “telegram,” and my heart plummeted. It could be nothing, but from movies and the stories I’ve heard, telegrams hold a negative connotation. I’m hoping for the best for this family, and families that are (or have) experienced this. Great job!
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Thanks so much. Even now, with telegrams a thing long gone the word is still charged with emotion. I so appreciate your kind words! Best wishes.
Tim
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Btw, it could just be me, but the link to this piece didn’t work
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Thanks for the heads up. I updated the post and it must have unlinked. I have put it up again. Very kind of you to mention it. 🙂
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Very vivid portrayal of sensitive feelings.
The image is so beautiful.
Thanks,
Anand 🙂
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Thanks so very much. There is great beauty in a simple family. Best wishes to you. 🙂
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I agree and you are most welcome 🙂
Anand
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aww this was lovely – I almost wish that I was there with them- so much love in that house 🙂
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Thank you for this. So delighted you enjoyed it. Very best wishes. ☺
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