Can the instruments, over-sensitive
Too susceptible to thoughtless pressure
Escape the damages of depression
And the breakages of gradual misuse?
Stop the red lights glowing in the night-time
Where only the darkness can restore light
By reconnecting the disconnected
And releasing them, blinking in sunshine
Each little indication, each flicker
A measurement of human happiness
…oOo…
Photo 101 prompt day 6 – Connect
very interesting and sublime.
how indeed can ‘instruments’ so sensitive avoid the occasion of depression and still stay ‘connected’ to what they measure? simple answer is that they can’t avoid the consequence of what they were made for. only by being unmade and disassembled. only to be re-purposed.can they be purposed again for a different happiness, one more worthy of their lights and life.
even in changing there is pain. regret is the lingering reminder of a gauge which was once broken but now being renewed for a different life.
-KIA
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I love what you have done with this and the way you express yourself. It is an very interesting concept to contemplate. What are we purposed for? Best wishes! TJ
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Thx for the kind words and encouragement. I very much appreciate your words and work too. Thank you again
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A real pleasure I can assure you.
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Wow LOVE the poem. Absolutely amazing! The image makes more sense with poem.
You showed a disconnection and a hope for connection. Great job.
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Thanks so much! You have made my day. I hope you have a very well-connected week! 🙂 TJ
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Wish the same for you. 🙂
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I love this. And I’ve missed your blog/posts. Glad Photo 101 could bring me back to you again. I hope you’ve been well.
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Thanks so much! A lazy holiday ended and back to the flood of work so have not had a lot of time to blog. The first rush is calming down a bit so hope to revisit my favorite challenges. Hope your year is going wonderfully well.
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Wowza, you really answered this prompt well, TJ!! My fave line is “Stop the red lights glowing in the night-time…” ooh, makes me sigh.
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Thanks! I tried to write the lines in iambic pentameter sort of sonnet style. (without the rhyme)
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Well done 🙂
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