Through the spider’s web
The wind whispers gentle songs
To the new born day
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Version 2
Through the spider’s web
The wind strumming lullabies
To the new born day
Which do you prefer?
Ronovan Writes Monday Haiku Prompts for the week this week are Sing and Day
This is a photograph I took of a peculiar spider that was on a rock wall at a quarry where we performed a Christmas Concert on the weekend.
As most people know, Perth is rife with critters that crawl, bite and sting but I have never seen this particular spider before. Perhaps I have discovered a rare new species!!!
You must be the first in for the challenge! Now I am guessing what the prompts are 🙂 a very lyrical soothing haiku — that spider does look unique. I bet if it was magnified it would look quite scary.
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I had to get very close in to get a good shot of it and it could move pretty fast. I agree that it would not be the sort of thing an ant for example would find comforting to see emerging from the darkness. Thanks for liking the haiku! A very merry Christmas to you and I hope you have a wonderful new year! TJ
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All the best for you as well. I wish you a happy Christmas and New Year !
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What a jewel of a spider it looks like a lampwork glass bead.
I like the first haiku best, not sure why, something about the way it sounds when I read it aloud. Love the imagery of both, it’s as if the spider makes a harp of its thread – beautiful.
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Thank you so much. I was so glad I had my phone with me and was able to get a shot of it before the light disappeared. It is just like a lampwork bead as you suggest. A lovely comparison. Hope you have a wonderful Christmas! TJ
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A very Merry Christmas to you too TJ.
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Merci! 🙂
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Reblogged this on ronovanwrites and commented:
FIRST OFFENDER!
TJ in with the most interesting sand spider ever. Remember to click through and like on his original post. @Roccoco_a_GoGo
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Thanks Ronovan! Very best wishes. TJ
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Both are great…I prefer the first one (since you asked). 🙂
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Thanks so much. I think I like the first one best too. 🙂
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The first one, not sure why but it feels right.
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Thanks so much. I agree. Best wishes for a great holiday season and happy new year! TJ
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You too, all the best for 2016.
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I do prefer the first haiku, but it’s a difficult choice. Nice!
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Thanks so much. It seems most prefer the first one. Hope you have a magical holiday season and great new year! TJ
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Thank you! Best wishes to you, also. May this time be filled with remembrance and joy.
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Merci! 🙂
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What a pleasant surprise, T.J. Love how you included the wind as another character in your beautiful haiku. It’s interesting how you demonstrated that altering the second line in such a subtle way could affect the musical timbre suggested. Such a unique photo.
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Thanks so much for this lovely comment. The photo was such a lucky capture I had to use it and the prompts were very kind this week. Hope you have a wonderful holiday season and great new year! TJ
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What an odd little creature–looks like he could be one of your interesting/pretty “household haiku challenge” items! I love both haiku equally, I must say–beautiful!
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Thanks so much. I have actually found out that it is known (very luckily) as a “Christmas Spider” so it fits the time very well. It is amazing how beautiful nature can be. Blessings! TJ
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Yes, there are several variations of the Christmas Spider story–ages ago someone made me a silver spider ornament (beautiful!), and enclosed the printed tale. Sadly, I guess it got lost in the shuffle of life…as I don’t have it now. Huge Blessings to you!!
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I must find the story. It is funny how things appear and disappear in the hurly burly of life. Best wishes for the fly toward Christmas day. 🙂
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I’m revved up for sure!! And I can’t thank you enough for reminding me about the Christmas Spider!! Completely forgot it–but now I’m going to research (google), maybe do my own poem… You’re such a lovely blog friend 🙂
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Wonderful connections across the oceans
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Oui!!
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My choice would be for the first, but to be honest I have a little phobia about spiders, and anything like photo of webs or poems about them tend to create an impulse to go elsewhere. Yet still your poems were, in spite of that, soothing.
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Oh dear. I am not keen on them myself but this one was so peculiar I had to take it. Hope you are enjoying a relaxing post-Christmas. 🙂
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Yes I am. Hope the same for you. Next up New Years Eve.
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I still can’t believe that it is the end of another year.
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