Flash Fiction on a Tuesday and a break from the poetic…

The sails of the windmill turned and, Marie, crouching behind the flour sacks, waited.
The cries beyond the mill’s walls had gradually stilled, leaving only the “shhhhh!” of the great millstone as it ground the abandoned wheat into powder.
The air was a rolling cloud of all enveloping white. Marie’s pink silk gown turned white, her porcelain skin turned white, but not her face; terror had made all colour flee long before this.
“But why Mamma and Pappa?” the question repeated in her brain. They had always been kind to the servants. Mamma herself would tend to the needs of the poor with generous gifts and the peasants seemed so happy in the countryside around their Chateau.
But suddenly, in a moment, the world had upended itself. Kind Pappa and Mamma became despised “Aristos” and the screaming mob had torn all society down.
And now Pappa and Mamma were on a tumbril heading for the guillotine and Marie was hiding in a mill, a strange ghost of a time past, lost in a new world.
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I can feel the terror that Marie is feeling in this story. How frightening that she is hiding for her life while her parents are on their way to the guillotine. Great story, TJ!
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Thanks so much and for using my picture! Hope you are having a great week. TJ
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You are welcome and thank you for allowing us to use it!
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An absolute pleasure! 🙂
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ash the Hapsbergs.. they were a little out of touch..weren’t they?
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But they did have some very nice things. 🙂
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yes.. and lots of babies 🙂
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Très intéressant. I didn’t realize this was taken in MontMartre. You gave a different historical perspective to your photo than I did. Well done.
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Thanks so much! I would have loved to have seen Montmartre when it was still rural and covered in windmills.
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I spent a day there many years ago. My recollection was a magnificent view of Paris, artists everywhere and great coffee. I hope that hasn’t changed.
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It still has a very unique feel. I hope to be back there later in the year.
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Love the referencing to history – a great read!
@Samantha/samratkel from
Shadow Realities
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Beautifully weaved tale with a touch of history. Great story, TJ. I feel bad for little Marie having to watch that gruesome scene.
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Thanks so much for the kind words. It was a horrifying time in French history.
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The fear sounded very palpable.
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Scary times! 🙂
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